🎬 What Worked
The laughs, favorite scenes, and characters that connected
Moment You Laughed the Hardest 83 responses
Boca Raton (52)
Humphrey
The third time the guy got shot
The part when the doctor and the mom where in Micks room when he got sick the first time!
Any time with Humphrey and Dr Phil
When Eagle saw Mick on the course practicing.
Dr phil
Hazard crew in office
The car scene
The bedroom scene when he got the iv from walburton and he finds out his mom and him are hooking up
When Sergio was in the car lol
Humphrey on the hamster wheel treadmill
Fat guy getting shot for the 2nd time
The doctor phil trying to be dad over and over
The mini golf commentators
Turkey getting shot
When the mom and doctor came down in the morning
When the fat guy keeps getting shot
Mr. Bawlls and the guy with hump every time
Anytime Dr. Phil was on screen!
When Humphrey was eating the turkey leg.
Murr on screen
Jonesie name is Mr balls
The moment when the parachute guy fell out of the sky
humphrey and dr phil
When they said “this isn’t regular golf, this is the real thing”
When Dr.Phil started staying at Micks house.
When the mom invited the doctor to stay for the night
David koechner knocking on the door
When Micks mother slept with Dr Phil
When the doctor came out wearing frog-print underwear
3rd time the fat guy got shot.
Fart in the car scene
Dr Phil moments Jonesy moments. Humphrey moments
The Doctor’s stuff….reminded me of SNL
Dr Phil petting Mick
The Dr office
Front desk women when mentioning the guy who wets himself is back
When mick met Dr Phil and gave him the bladder prescription
, Dr Phil and the mom, wet pants, turkey
Little being arrested
With jonesy and when Dr frog touched micky
When you went to fight over the bird trash can
Credit/ bloopers. Commentator, jonesy, doctors lines are all great, his wallpaper and the frog references.
When the coach was telling the kids about his wife and his brother.
Loved the music, biggest laugh might be when the kid was defecating on course at birthday party.
The Wetting himself scene and the mom + Dr. getting together.
When Dr Phil first came to the Micks House and acted like his dad
The scene where eagle uses the sweaty towel
Dr. Phil scenes
When the nurse look 👀 at Mick wet pants… assuming he wet himself 😂😂😂😭
During the reenactment of when mini golf was invented
Dr Phil’s frog boxers.
Milk references
Milk references
Los Angeles (31)
Humphrey
when humphrey would eat the turkey legs
Dr. Interaction every time
The doctors lines and the holy water line
When the doctor mentioned doing a heist
Dr Phil all scenes, Jonesy’s beginning scenes
Don’t recall specific moments but there was good play off the different characters.
Dr Phil’s frogs
The eagle’s scenes were fantastic. And the holy water joke really landed.
Humphrey with the turkey leg & the vendor
Can’t remember.
Patrick scenes got me every time.
Dr. Phil and the two sports announcers were the best consistent laughs
When he farted in the car.
Mostly the parts with Dr phill
I’m not employed
When David koechner was speaking anytime… his timing is perfect!
Doctor’s scenes were all fun.
Overall, consistent levels of entertainment, story and jokes.
Overall, consistent levels of entertainment, story and jokes.
Frog doctor calling mick his son
Dr Phil parts
When grandma Pam came on because it was a surprise.
I can't think of just one. In honest fashion this is one of the greatest comedies I've seen in a theater setting in years and years.
Dr. Phil
Patrick with The father son mentions
David keochner’s speech
Murray’s wetting pants
Also loved the guy falling asleep on mick and picking the seat next to him instead of a thousand others
David keochner’s speech
Murray’s wetting pants
Also loved the guy falling asleep on mick and picking the seat next to him instead of a thousand others
I really liked the part with Humphrey and the turkey leg vendor. The shooting of the fat man was funny too. I think my favorite joke was when Mick kept spilling stuff on his pants at the hospital.
Jonesy carrying the poop bag after yelling at the kid to stop defecating on the green.
I like the jokes when the Dr asks him about doing a heist, the under us breath is like huh? No, huh? Also more jokes like the kidney one would be good in there too maybe 3x jokes on that Dr skit. I think he could also cont with him like he’s always Propositioning him for something. Then be like no.
Tiny being 14 yo, Dr Phil becoming more aggressively touchy, the commentators, Eagle.
I liked a lot the first part with little Mick and Jonsey
When young Mick and Jonsey shoot puggy man, and young Micks first tournament.
Jonsey scenes, especially at the beginning with young Mick.
Favorite Scene(s) 82 responses
Boca Raton (51)
Humphrey
The moment he found out Vanessa wired him the money
The skydiver falling scene
When the eagle found out mick was playing again
mick’s mom and the doctor, morning after
Mick and Jonesy in the truck
Meeting Dr phil
Dr Phil
Bedroom iv scene honestly any scene with walburton
All scenes with Vanessa all scenes with young Mick
Jonesy’s birthday party introduction to mini golf
Jonesy’s birthday party introduction to mini golf
All
The moments where funny or wacky things would happen without much acknowledgement from characters
With the mom and Dr Phil when she asks him to spend the night
Creating vanessas golf club
Doctor calling Mickey son
Montage of mick training.
Humphrey
Dr Phil scenes
Humphrey
Dr Phil scenes
the guy with the hump
All of Dr Phil’s scenes
When Humphrey was eating the turkey leg
Hamster wheel Humphrey
The gardener getting shot
My favorite scenes are all scenes with Humphrey and the prison scene
dr phil scenes
Everything with the announcers
Anything with Dr.Phil
Vanessa’s reunion with Mick
Dr Phil the first time
News anchoe
News anchoe
When he heard they wire the money.
Vanessa give big hug in Mike
The ending was great.
At the end when Vanessa visits him at his home
Jonesy in the begginning
The tournament/ Vanessa hitting her father’s nuts
Not sure
the scene between mick and Vanessa bonding
Both scenes where the musket is pointed at the crowd
Meeting with Dr Phil
Mick winning
First meeting dr Phil
Mother a doctor were in honey bedroom
Vanessa gave the money to the hospital
Vanessa coming to his bedroom at the end of the movie. The hospital waiting room. And doctors office.
When the coac is talking to Mick's mom through the door.
When jonesy farted in truck, beginning when they were at birthday party and with Dr Phil
Mom and dad getting together
Dr phil spending the night,
Humphrey with the turkey legs.
Mick training.
Humphrey with the turkey legs.
Mick training.
Vanessa when she acknowledge she gave 110,000
Dr. Phil multiple scenes
Joey multiple scenes
Dr. Phil multiple scenes
Joey multiple scenes
All of the Dr. Phil scenes
When the nurse look 👀 at Mick wet pants… assuming he wet himself 😂😂😂😭
Jonesy talking to Micks mom to sway her into letting him play mini golf. Jonesy and Mick in the truck with the fart. Really all Jonesy scenes were good.
Training montage
Los Angeles (31)
Humphrey turkey legs
any moment with humphrey
Getting shot by muskets
Scenes when the doctor comes into micks house and is interacting with his mom. LOVED the music.
The bloopers
Dr Phil in his office
The competition scenes
I really liked the car scene with mick and jonsey
I loved the scenes with the Eagle. I think the Mick Vanesa chemistry was strong.
Employee getting shot with the musket
Too many golf scenes.
Anything with Patrick. Loved the soundtrack Brandon was great and grounded throughout.
All of the montage scenes were great! I also loved the era of the music
When they were showing all the trophies he won at the beginning with Jonesy
I didn’t really have a favorite scene
When Mick child get gun
The interaction between the young kid actor and David
Doctor establishing himself as a “family member”.
Frog doctor talking about money laundering
Announcers and dr Phil and loved the music
The doctor the next morning with micks mom. It was funny
David Koechner's character all.
Patrick Warburg on all scenes.
Humphrey.
This movie is phenomenal I couldn't stop laughing.
Patrick Warburg on all scenes.
Humphrey.
This movie is phenomenal I couldn't stop laughing.
Origin of mini golf, Mick talks to Eagle, Meet Dr. Phil, Jonsey talks to Mom
Keochner fart scene
Patrick’s office scene
The frog underwear was such a great addition
Patrick’s office scene
The frog underwear was such a great addition
I liked the scene where Mick kept getting wet pants, and the secretary at the hospital told the doctor it was the kid who kept wetting his pants.
Dr. Phil office scenes were hilarious!
The Dr scenes, he was funny, him after the mom, him being slightly shady
Great intro to the characters, and the transitions to passing years. Loved David Koechner, he’s great in everything, he and Patrick Walburton stole the movie, Humphrey felt forced sometimes but the “Usual Suspects” ending completely made up for it. Also blown away by the fact Mick ended up with Vanessa - that was a nice change. Thought for sure he would end up with Lily, which her turn as a traitor surprised me. Also, as someone born with one hand, the TWO characters with missing hands made me laugh.
First scenes: beautiful colors, musics, harmony, comedy.
Tournament scenes
Jonsay
Tournament scenes
Jonsay
All of Jonsey and Young Micks scenes were all good
Jonsey and young mick. I really enjoyed the core story, the relationships between young Mick and Jonsey. I’d like to see more about the two main characters. I love Jonsey.
Favorite Character(s) 83 responses
Boca Raton (52)
Humphrey
Micky
Humphrey
Humphrey / Dr Phil
Eagle
Dr Phil
Dr phil
Mick, Phil
Dr Phil walburton character,humphrey
Humphrey
The sports announcers, Humphrey Vanessa, Young Mick Jacob
Humfry
Dr. Phil and humphrey
Vanessa, Humphrey, Dr Phil
Humphrey
Mickey
Humphrey and doctor phillip
the guy with the hump and venessa
Dr. Phil and Humphrey
Humphrey
Mick
Leonard
Humphrey and Atlantis guy
humphrey and dr phil
Lily and Jonsey
Dr.Phil, Mick Skylark, C.S. Lewis
Vanessa
Enrique
Dr Phil
Doctor
Coach
All of them
Dr Phil. Eagle Humphrey
Friends at bowling alley
Mick, Dr Phil
Mick
Dr Phil
Mickey, Lilly
Mick, Vanessa, Announcers
Humphrey
Micky
The concept comedy
Doctor, commentators micks bowling buddies
Mick's girlfriend
Dr Phil, Mick, and his buddy with glasses
Humfrey
Dr Phil, Humphrey, mick, Mr bawls
Jonesy Vanessa Mr. Phil Micks mom
Dr. Phil, Humphrey, henchman in the car
Mick Coach
Jonesy, Humphrey.
Dr Phil
Los Angeles (31)
Humphrey, eagle
humphrey!!!!
Dr. Phil
Doctor, Mick, Mom
Mick, Doctor, Jonesy
Dr Phil, Jonesy
Mick
mick, jonsey, guy that stole micks gf
Eagle. The announcers.
Humphrey
Mick
Jesse, mick, Humphrey, eagle, guy who stole micks girl
Mick was so loveable (both ages), Sports casters, and Dr. Phil
Mick
Dr phill
Mick child
Bawls
Doctor
Humphrey
Dr Phil, Humphrey
The doctor
Young mick, Mr. Bahlls, Dr. Phil, Humphrey, mick,
Jonsey and Dr. Phil
Mick Thomas Lennon Eagle Mr. balls and doctor
Dr Phil
Jonesy, Dr. Phil
The slimey Dr and the golf announcers
Jonesy, Humphrey, Dr Phil,
Jonsey and little Mick
Young Mick and Jonsey
Jonsey and Young Mick
🔧 What Needs Work
Pain points, pacing issues, and scenes to reconsider
Least Favorite Scene 76 responses
Boca Raton (45)
The bird getting shot!
The lighting strike scene. Cloud looked really fake, but maybe that was the trick.
The lightning scene could be better
His random girlfriend cheating
Bitcoin scene
I think overall too much prayer
Only critique I can give is intro it better with the title it felt to long if an intro to throw the title there
Crystal everything about Crystal
The tournament ran a bit long pacing wise
Bowling scenes
Micks girlfriend
Bowling scene
Bowling scenes
the lab
Bowling scenes
The lab scene when they were making the golf club.
I don’t have one
When coach first comes to the house to recruit mick only because it drags a bit.
cant think of one
Turkey dumpster
Breakup scene
the whole thing with the man falling out of the sky. It just seemed random and unnecessary
Anything with Humphrey
Honestly they were all good scenes.
Doctor getting involved with Mike mom
When the coach was struck by lightning it was unrealistic.
Don’t have one
The shooting of the parachutist
The skydiver
Humpfrey eating the turkey lega
TV prompt for opening the tournament
In the golf lab
Treadmill
The girlfriend felt unnecessary thought she was a roommate at first and then all the sudden he got cheated on
Bowling
Mom love the doctor
Lab and dumpster scenes
The turkey leg scences.
Some of scenes with Jonesy and Mick might be better slightly shorter but not much would be needed
Bowling
First meeting micks girlfriend with the beans. It just felt tooo awkward
Idk
-Zen
-Zen
Have no least favorite
The scenes with gin reoccurred way too much. 3 or less is good.
Mick in jonsey’s hospital room. The guy who tells him something about blue skies. Who was that dude?
Los Angeles (31)
Unsure
i’m not sure
Lab scene
Guy shot out of sky
With the Igor type character
The montages felt a little long
The science lab scenes
none!
The lab scene where the putter was made.
The ending felt a little rushed with the poisoning. As quick as it came, it was over & then bawll was awake
Don’t have any.
There were some sections that weren’t explained like it it was cut out for editing sake
Parachute scene when the friend with the glasses breaks the 4th wall - also didn’t like the rifle loading scene with the referee.
They were all really good.
I didn’t really have a least favorite scene
Nothing
The bowling scenes weren’t as good
Prison scene felt a bit unnecessary but it got resolved by not pressing charges. Still a detour that didn’t add much.
The intro scene between kid and mom before they got the golf course
Some of the beginning seemed slow —
When the skydiver got shot in the sky
I can't think of one they're all necessary to story and stacked with humor.
Skydiver
the fight scene was confusing but I think it’ll be so funny with the finished music
I can’t say that I have a least favorite scene. The whole thing was funny
Not sure
All the scenes in the lab with the guys in the lab scenes. Those were a little boring and felt too much like a Nickelodeon skit that wasn’t working.
The big competition at the end felt kinda cookie cutter to these kinds of sports-comedy films, which is why I get the wild off-the-rails scene of the guy falling from the sky. Comes out of nowhere, but needs tweaking but could be the weirdest funniest scene in the whole thing.
To much Humphrey, and the scenes with the hot turckey legs are useless for the main story of the movie.
Also the scenes with Vanessa papa, too much…they are not part of the main story. There are so many characters and scenes, but you risk to loose the focus of the story, instead I would go deeper worh the relashionship with Jonsey and Mick or with Vanessa
Also the scenes with Vanessa papa, too much…they are not part of the main story. There are so many characters and scenes, but you risk to loose the focus of the story, instead I would go deeper worh the relashionship with Jonsey and Mick or with Vanessa
All of the bowling, all of Vannessa’s laboratory
There is too much of Humphrey, there are too many scenes with secondary characters. They’re funny, but I want to see the main story, understand why Mick is wearing that uniform, more about Jonsey and Mick.
Jokes That Fell Flat — Details 32 responses
Boca Raton (15)
A few
Too much diarrhea
The fart in the car
Hard to say.
The dumpster turkey scene
The sky diver scene
The sky diver scene
Murr from impractical jokers peeing his pants felt repetitive from when mick did it
Humphrey
When Dr Phil told Mick to unplug.
There were a few. Maybe the referring to the fat guy
I found Humphrey to fall flat on most of hi lines
The awkward moment at the beginning with jonesy being first introduced
Too many musket casualties, the turkey is funny when humpry has it though. and the sky diver, and the dumpster scene
I can’t remember
- Zen
- Zen
The Russian practicing English. The pant wetting. Wasn't feeling the frog I session much.
A lot of the small talk could be cut. The awkward silences dragged the pacing
Los Angeles (17)
The guy falling out of the sky
The office scenes with Vanessa’s dad, could’ve maybe been edited a little tighter
The scientist/ science lab
Can’t remember.
Some of the jokes didn’t time out with the editing but overall really good
Some of the jokes at the beginning felt a little forced or as if there was too much space for it to hang there
When the guy was shot and landed
You should have been showed shot immediately, and that should’ve been a couple of jokes after that instead of it being so dead pan
You should have been showed shot immediately, and that should’ve been a couple of jokes after that instead of it being so dead pan
Some of eagles in the first half of the movie
The friend at bowling alley with glasses sometimes
I don’t remember but some of them were just not as funny.
The skydiver
Some of the bits went on a bit too long, and the timing kind of killed the moment. Also didn’t understand why Eagle vomited at the bird randomly.
I think the egore bits were too long. The editing needs to be a little tighter on the jokes.
The guy falling out of the sky scene - scene has potential, but I totally see what they are trying to do, but needs clarity.
A lot in the middle of the movie, some gags/sketchs were slow, out of comic time.
In the middle of the film wheb the bowling is happening nothing funny happens its all serious and sad
It was a little flat in the middle of the film, the chicken scene, the man from the sky falling, Vanessa’s office. Many ripetitions.
Parts That Felt Slow or Unnecessary 12 responses
Boca Raton (6)
Continuity error early at the birthday party. Jonsey is drinking a pina colada and has 3 or 4 empties next to him, next scene everything is gone from next to the chair. Also the hat over bed frame in Micks childhood room when he comes back is a sorority not fraternity.
Dr phil
The laboratory building the golf putter
It was just too long.
The training up to the championship and the championship itself felt pretty long. There were multiple transitions that just didn't feel natural. More forced and stayed to long to get the laugh.
A lot of the filler scenes felt redundant. Like ones that showed how Mick ended up at a location. They don’t establish much else besides that. Also mick’s girlfriend felt unnecessary. And the Vanessa’s putter doesn’t come back at all
Los Angeles (6)
Some mini golf montages
The lab putter scene.
At points I felt like the events would start to build towards the end, and then we’d go follow something Humphrey or other little thing that wasn’t as important, and it would kill the momentum of the events.
All bowling part. Vanessa papa office and laboratory, hot turckey leg vendor. Hospital waiting room
All of the bowling parts and Vannessa laboratory
In the middle of the film. Too much of Vanessa’s office, too much Vanessa’s dad office. I want to see more golf and preparation for the tournament. I want to see more about Jonsey and Mock relationship. I’d like to understand better why Mick is wearing the uniform. I think that it’s pretty funny.
Character(s) That Didn't Work 49 responses
Boca Raton (29)
Girlfriend
Not sure
Crystal
None of them worked for me. I’m an independent contractor.
lily and the bald scientist
Lily and the bald scientist
None really all where pretty written pretty good
At times frog guy was a bit much. Very funny but some jokes are too drawn out
the odd friend who bowled with them who didnt know the clock joke
The guy holding the boxing gloves
The ex girlfriend
Humphrey, Lily
Humphrey x1000
Vanessa’s father.
They all worked. Maybe the second mini golf owner
Humpback
Jonesy
Humphrey
No not really
Eagle
Mike
Some of the lab people
The huntchback
The turkey leg vendor I thought was going to be more pertinent and would have played some kind of role
Father
I don’t think I have one
Not really
Eagle
Jonsey
Los Angeles (20)
nope!
The Igor looking dude
Humphrey had potential but fell flat at times
Hunch
more frogs!
They all played a necessary roll.
All of them worked. Some of the other putters needed some more backstory.
The first girlfriend
Probably lily because her character feels like a one and done
None particular
The blonde girl didn’t feel fully fleshed out. When she had her backstab reveal moment it didn’t impact me as much
Friend at bowling alley (glasses) and maybe too much of crowd shots at matches
No I liked them all
Lily had no character or chemistry with Mick
The bowling guy with the glasses was doing way too much in my opinion.
The whole Dr scenes in the lab. Cut those.
Mick could be a little more likable, he got better in the third act. Vanessa’s dad and head lab guy were a bit much,
To mich Dr phil and the story with Mick’s mom. The hot turchey legs vendor. Laboratory cleaners (green). To much Humprey and vanessa’s papa asian scientist
Too much Humphery, Turkey leg dealer, all of the laboratory Cleaners
Too many secondary characters. I want to see more Jonsey, and young Mick and Mick.
🎬 Ending & Emotions
How the ending landed and what audiences felt
How the Ending Made You Feel 70 responses
Boca Raton (42)
Happy and emotional
Happy Mr. Bawls was in good health
Happy
Satisfied
Good
Happy
Happy n exstatic
Happy
Great ‼️
Happy
satisfied
Content
Happened a little too fast. (That’s what she said)
plot twisting and happy because i thought the main character would be with lilly
Happy
I liked it a lot it was very nice.
Good cause Mr balls came back
Heart warmed
good
It was a nice surprise he ended up with Vanessa and not lily
Bittersweet. Wholesome ending but almost feels a little undeserved
Confused, we didn’t get much resolution from Lily
Amazed by Vanessa generosity.
Happy
Happy
Inspired. Goosebumps
Quick change / Vanessa was a good one not a villain
That it ended in a positive way.
Loved that Mick ended up with Vanessa and not Lilly
Happy
Satisfied
It felt a little rushed
Real good emotional and gratifying to see competitors come together
Happy
Happy
Happy
Was good, thought it might of tied up a subplot. Like his mom and Dr Phil getting married and he’s the dad that he never had referenced from begining
It made me feel good and happy
Very good
Heartwarming
Good
Happy for mick
Los Angeles (28)
happy, relieved
Good
Happy, nice ending.
Good, nice moment with Jonesy
I like that he didn’t win but it was still resolved.
good!!!
It was a warm ending but not surprising.
Rushed.
Good.
Bitcoin thing seemed a little weird but I get it.
Happy and content
Good.
Pretty good
Happy
Content!
Good. Not super surprising but for a movie like this, it was kind of expected.
Wholesome ending
Really great
It felt nice because it ended in a funny but important way.
So happy. I would absolutely love to see a sequel though I think the Bitcoin wraps into that well as a lead off.
I think it was perfect bringing it back to silly like reminding you it’s literally mini golf I loved it
It felt a slight bit forced, because Lily seemed like Mick’s girl for most of the movie, until Vanessa swoops in at the end.
It was nice, I just felt kinda weird that Mick and Vanessa didn’t win.
Good.
Uplifted, amused.
Happy
Happy
Good
💬 Final Thoughts
Additional comments, suggestions, and overall reactions
Additional Thoughts & Comments 40 responses
Boca Raton (21)
Well done!!!
Lightning scene needs to be better
I’m still smiling after watching and that's a great thing!
Overall positive
Intro it sooner if possible honestly over all great great jokes evrrything
I would’ve liked to see Mick Russell, the turkey and I also feel that mix practicing could’ve been a little shorter
Very good movie
Too many fade to black between scenes
Fuck the guy telling us to vote. I believe that dickheads name was Dylan. Also fuck Dylan.
Great casting
You need to add more suspenseful music because it just felt like normal scenes.
- mini golf rules scene dragged a little
- Lightning strike needs something like charred clothes and burn marks
- Some transitions feel weird, like mick closing the alley to the lab.
- I feel like the girlfriend/breakup scenes don’t add much at all (only seen post bowling and breakup)
- Blue bird scenes AI? It looks AI, newer models would suit this a lot better
- 1 hour in, training montage, one of the swings clips through the mask for the split comp.
- Tracking on the TV in the tournament opening speech was off
- Earlier it seemed the live logo is attached to the top, later in the movie there’s a gap.
- Subtle flicker on micks closeup during mick and Vanessa heart to heart.
- Lightning strike needs something like charred clothes and burn marks
- Some transitions feel weird, like mick closing the alley to the lab.
- I feel like the girlfriend/breakup scenes don’t add much at all (only seen post bowling and breakup)
- Blue bird scenes AI? It looks AI, newer models would suit this a lot better
- 1 hour in, training montage, one of the swings clips through the mask for the split comp.
- Tracking on the TV in the tournament opening speech was off
- Earlier it seemed the live logo is attached to the top, later in the movie there’s a gap.
- Subtle flicker on micks closeup during mick and Vanessa heart to heart.
I wish we saw more when characters hit the ball in the hole. It was mostly just their reactions. Also Lily didn’t get a scene with Mick after the betrayal.
When he’s struck by lightning, he should’ve been holding a golf club as a conductor, therefore it’s more tangibly mick’s fault and him blaming golf
In the beginning when there were words on the screen to desecrate of the mini golfers, you should change that to keep the words on the screen longer to allow viewers more time to read the words. I couldn’t read them all due to the short time.
It’s me Josh Miller. The second viewing made me like the movie even more. I enjoyed it even more the second time
Great songs!!! Loved the audio and the announcers were funny
Can be Cut a a handful moments down. some of the timing drags out
Was very entertaining,
Honestly, I thought it was a pretty good movie, it felt like how older movies in the golden age were being made.
I think the scenes hold out a little too long to land the joke, and there were scenes that didn't have a joke and still had excess fluff. I can definitely see this being a kids movie, pre-teens and a little before that age. I think it's gotta be quicker and grab more attention with the dialogues and transitions since kids are force fed constant entertainment/stimulation.
Los Angeles (19)
So many great laughs! Loved the broadcast hosts too. Mick is a truly like able character you root for. Loved the parents chosen for him. Loved the sign saying free tiny.
I couldn't tell what Mick's relationship was with the woman that was living with him until it was revealed that he was cheating
Great music choices
I think the movie is little too long and the pacing was a little slower than I think was necessary.
I think there was a bit of an issue with pacing. There were moments that felt like they dragged & others where it felt rushed. I don’t necessarily think it was an issue but I think the final edit will play a big part
Really loved the overall tone. Some of the scenes needed a little more explanation, mostly when Venessa came up and said they had talked about something before.
I feel like some of the timing can be tightened up especially at the beginning - Johnny’s comedic timing in the beginning can be tightened - not so much space.
A lot of the banter that was done in terms of the jokes were super. I like that they were stupid done on purpose.
Silly fun movie with quirks and wholesome content.
Maybe the scenes with the evil dad and bald guy were a little long
I thought the music should be balenced with the characters audio.
This was by far my favorite comedy I've caught in years. It never went too gory disgusting or graphic and it's something I want everyone to see. I think it blows the sequel to happy Gilmore out of the water. This is an incredible film. I hope to work on a project like this someday on an acting standpoint. Material like this is hard to find these days.
loved the little details and quick side jokes
This movie was stupid but in a good way
I think the cuts need to be edited tighter, I’d remove all the lab scenes, they distract from the story. Maybe tiny bits but it’s too cheesy. I like the beginning scenes when he’s in his bike, those work but maybe put a different color or filters so we know it’s the past and not current. Kinda wonder years vibes. I’d also love some narration or voice over the cuts so the audio goes over the shots a little bit to introduce the cuts. Also joke on the end with Bitcoin, you should have him say he bought 300 of them when they were just a quarter. As if he’s just giving a little kid a quarter. You could even put fore shadowing in that with a shot of a quarter or him giving him quarters idk, or just adding that line in, in ADR. Then you realize that he’s got like 300 bitcoins but doesn’t know he’s rich. Just an idea but could be funny. But over all editing the shots needs to be about 2-3 secs cut shorter because it will make the jokes hit, similar to how the office is edited. They got to be tighter or they are too predictable. That’s about it. I also think more time laps shots with him training, the Rocky scene needs more, more time laso, stressing out like the character really wants this.
If this came out between 1995-1999 this movie would’ve made $150 million. My first impressions were very Happy Madison/Adam Sandler vibe with a few little touches of Naked Gun slap-stick. The potential this has is pretty big - especially with everyone craving comedy again. Definitely had some good laughs, really funny scenes, a little silly at times for silly sake, but fun
Focus on the main story.
Don’t get lost too much with single characters or funny gags.
Some scenes, could be more funny, but they are slow with not comic timing
Don’t get lost too much with single characters or funny gags.
Some scenes, could be more funny, but they are slow with not comic timing
I think that there should be more Young Mick flashbacks and more jonsey and young mick scenes
More Jonsey and Mick. More mini prodigy scenes.
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